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Twenty years before the UAE did not have problems such as now. Always developed cities and the number of the population is facing increasing problems. I will mention some of these problems and I will try to put solutions.
The first of these problems are traffic congestion. This is a natural with the increasing number of drivers and the number of vehicles in the city. The reason for this is that because the travel by private car is the most commonly used in the UAE. This makes it worse in the morning when people go to work and they return in the afternoon. The second problem is traffic accidents which are also cause of traffic congestion and the speeding. The last problem that I would like to talk about is parking especially.
First, we can solve the problem of traffic congestion by widen roads, streets, and rebuild the infrastructure. We can also reduce traffic congestion by providing means of transport other than taxis and at a lower cost for example buses and metro. I advise ministries not to make the start times at the same time. In the sense that not all people start their work at the seven or eight and that is what is going on here. Most of the business starts at the same time. In the other hand, if we reduce traffic congestion we can also reduce traffic accident. The last problem is parking we can reduce it by build building just for parking near the residential areas.
In conclusion, Problems such as these take time to resolve and require advance planning. And do not forget the work of traffic to mitigate these problems and apply the law seriously.

Problem/solution essay

Twenty years before the UAE did not have problems such as now. Always developed cities and the number of the population is facing increasing problems. I will mention some of these problems and I will try to put solutions.
The first of these problems are traffic congestion. This is a natural with the increasing number of drivers and the number of vehicles in the city. This makes it worse in the morning when people go to work and they return in the afternoon. The second problem is traffic accidents which is also cause of traffic congestion. The last problem that I would like to talk about is parking especially.
We can solve the problem of traffic congestion by widen roads, streets, and rebuild the infrastructure. We can also reduce traffic congestion by providing means of transport other than taxis and at a lower cost for example buses and metro. In the other hand, if we reduce traffic congestion we can also reduce traffic accident. The last problem is parking, we can reduce it by build building just for parking near the residential areas.
In conclusion, Problems such as these take time to resolve and require advance planning